Moment in time
On the slippery slide on top of the water I slid down on my butt. I turned onto my tummy. It was a bathtub. It was so slippery I slid into two boys it was so Hilarious. But I was still going. When the plat fromm had arrived I was still going ‘not again’
I bumped into a family. Laughing was now a pro when I was bumping into everyone.
This week I've wrote a moment in time story.Moment in time is when you zoom in one part of the story.
I went to fiji and wrote about a bouncy castle in the water.
Hi portia
ReplyDeleteI love how you describe who you bumped into I cant believe that there was a bouncy castle in the water it must be so much fun!
Maybe you could fix up the writing because it goes off the page
but great work!
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